ShinyHappyGoth
New Student
Viking name: Valgerðr. Not exaclty the target demographic, but don't worry, I'm very immature.
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Post by ShinyHappyGoth on Aug 9, 2013 9:28:05 GMT -8
It's "lavender", not "lavendar". (And it's very good added to Earl Grey!)
In the wolf quest, I forget the exact wording, but there was something about "since we started fishing for our dragons." Shouldn't that be "since we started fishing more for our dragons" or "since we started fishing for our dragons in addition to ourselves"? I mean... Vikings fish. It is a thing that they do. I just find the wording to be awkward.
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Post by firestar on Aug 9, 2013 18:21:43 GMT -8
The wording sounds fine to me.
Vikings fish for themselves.
They also fish for their dragons.
This was not always the case so they had to start some time.
"Sine we started fishing more for our dragons" implies they have been doing so all along.
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ShinyHappyGoth
New Student
Viking name: Valgerðr. Not exaclty the target demographic, but don't worry, I'm very immature.
Posts: 39
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Post by ShinyHappyGoth on Aug 9, 2013 18:23:05 GMT -8
True, it's difficult to get totally unambiguous wording. "Since we started fishing more to accommodate our dragons," perhaps?
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The Joshinator
Viking-In-Training
WARNING: Watch for Falling Essays.
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Post by The Joshinator on Aug 12, 2013 10:42:52 GMT -8
Another wording issue I found is in the quest to help the Botanist build a machine to water her plants. At the beginning, Hiccup says you need a grooved wheel (like a pulley, which is what you would actually need) but through the rest of the mission it's referred to as a toothed wheel and shown as a gear.
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Post by Brynjolf on Aug 13, 2013 9:49:08 GMT -8
It's "lavender", not "lavendar". (And it's very good added to Earl Grey!)
In the wolf quest, I forget the exact wording, but there was something about "since we started fishing for our dragons." Shouldn't that be "since we started fishing more for our dragons" or "since we started fishing for our dragons in addition to ourselves"? I mean... Vikings fish. It is a thing that they do. I just find the wording to be awkward.
Thanks for pointing out that typo to us, ShinyHappyGoth. We'll have that fixed. |
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Post by Brynjolf on Aug 13, 2013 9:50:01 GMT -8
Another wording issue I found is in the quest to help the Botanist build a machine to water her plants. At the beginning, Hiccup says you need a grooved wheel (like a pulley, which is what you would actually need) but through the rest of the mission it's referred to as a toothed wheel and shown as a gear. Thanks for pointing this out, thejoshinator! |
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Post by Brynjolf on Aug 13, 2013 10:41:15 GMT -8
Hey everyone. The typos and grammatical errors have been fixed. Thanks for your help!
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